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James Kelly -Redemption- by ~BlackDragonBloodLust:iconBlackDragonBloodLust:



He grew up alone, or too closed in. He destroyed his already ruined family. Abandoned the only ones who cared; convinced himself they didn't. Hurt all who got in his way. Pushed aside the comfort some offered; MADE them give all he wanted, all they WOULDN'T offer. Left them broken, beaten, and bleeding. Build a wall and hid his emotions. All because he couldn't deal and couldn't accept the love he craved so deeply. His heart broken, his mind shattered. No clues remain of what he could have been; only whispers of what he is. Now he's stuck again; chained down and shackled to a life he never wanted. He makes excuses to the children he didn't know he had...prays for forgiveness, love, and maybe just a bit of
REDEMPTION.
:iconblackdragonbloodlust:

Author's Comments

I wrote this for a project in my english class, I'm not sure why I made it about James...it was supposed to be about me...but I wrote about him. I don't like it as much as I did back then. But it's not the WORST thing I've ever done.

EDIT: ...I edited it ._.
i fixed some spelling things and changed a few words that i typed wrong, put the right words in...took a few words out to make it sound better....it's fixed now ._.

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:iconobsidian-nightfall:
Great work Daxki, i really like this piece, well done...

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'A burnt child loves fire' - Oscar Wilde
:iconblackdragonbloodlust:
thank you so much <3
James has been on my mind a lot, and I remembered I had written this a few weeks back.

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~"They're comfortable shoes! They only hurt when I walk."
~"We're talking about angry chickens and barbed wire!"
~"Ho- wha- Those words don't even make sense when put together!"
~"Carl, Do you want to explain your picture?"
"Not at all."
:iconobsidian-nightfall:
You are most welcome my friend... Sometimes the best friend you can have is one you have mind...

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'A burnt child loves fire' - Oscar Wilde
:iconblackdragonbloodlust:
:hug: so true.

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~"They're comfortable shoes! They only hurt when I walk."
~"We're talking about angry chickens and barbed wire!"
~"Ho- wha- Those words don't even make sense when put together!"
~"Carl, Do you want to explain your picture?"
"Not at all."
:iconrahuofredtalons:
pretty, fitting, and downright true. he will get redemption, sooner or later. i think right now.....right now he needs to be shown he is loved dearly (expecially on the forum!) and that he isnt alone.

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like demons? XD join the club [link] the demons club for demon lovers

SOMEBODY CALL THE WAAAAAAAAAHMBULANCE!
:iconblackdragonbloodlust:
He doesn't think he will...he DOES need love but I doubt he'll ever consider it "true" or even REAL love...he knows he isn't alone. he knows there are more people out there who have been through shit like this, shit even WORSE than this, but the thing is...he doesn't care. he doesn't care about any of them one fucking bit, HE'S more important than them HIS problems are more important than theirs, and it's THEIR fault whatever happened to them happened. All things said by him at once point or another...reverse the first two and keep the last one the same and its all stuff he thinks about himself. He thinks he isn't important, anything that goes on that doesn't involve him is more important than what goes on that DOES involve him (hell, the WIND BLOWING is more important than him and his problems), and of course...he thinks it's all his fault. he was too weak, too stupid, too WHATEVER...he should have been able to stop it...but he didn't. he COULDN'T.

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~"They're comfortable shoes! They only hurt when I walk."
~"We're talking about angry chickens and barbed wire!"
~"Ho- wha- Those words don't even make sense when put together!"
~"Carl, Do you want to explain your picture?"
"Not at all."
:iconrahuofredtalons:
thats all very true but the big point in the matter is that he is loved, he needs his eyes opened to that, like a certain event to open his eyes and stuff to it all. he needs to be put back on track instead of his train derailed and laying uselessly in a ditch somewhere, he NEEDS to be shut off and fixed! the guy also could use a hug XD

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like demons? XD join the club [link] the demons club for demon lovers

SOMEBODY CALL THE WAAAAAAAAAHMBULANCE!
:iconblackdragonbloodlust:
he really could...someone need to just sit him down and play therapist for him like he has been doing for everyone else...once he's done with Warden first though, i suppose XD

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~"They're comfortable shoes! They only hurt when I walk."
~"We're talking about angry chickens and barbed wire!"
~"Ho- wha- Those words don't even make sense when put together!"
~"Carl, Do you want to explain your picture?"
"Not at all."
:iconparanormalfreak23:
That sounds so depresiing.........It's very good.

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We're all a little bit crazy......and there's nothing we can do about it!:heart:

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